Friday, December 29, 2006

行路难

外行不得唯有简出。
意在远出,雨阻少年。
三日连绵雨,泥泞碍前程。
伞不能防雨,车不能行使。
行路难,今日何从?

倚门伫望,雨点密密。
少年长叹气,雨突兀怅惘。
是否天哀哭?天为谁落泪?

苍天兼爱,地容众生。
怀才志不成,殆尽心血梦!
慈心上苍惜爱才,哭泣无功名少年。
行路难,今日何从?

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice! :)

Hee, was inspired by the verses and thought of this on the spot, hope it makes sense :P

行路难,今日何从?

细雨轻落,模糊方前路。
茫茫人生何处行,寥寥功名选几何?

行路难,今日何从?

Anonymous said...

wow, i like it. so much more refined. good attempt!

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